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It's sad I have nothing left to live for
It's pathetic I have nothing left to die for
All I wanted was you in my arms
All I got was a heartbreak
Another day passes by
Still my wound troubles
Still I wear a false smile
Another year will pass by
And will I be healed then?
Never to feel your flesh against mine
Never to have your soft embrace
Never again to feel your weight on my leg
I wanted to say I belived the lie
I still want to say the truth
There was no truth
There was only Lies
What happens to the Soldier in world peace?
What happens to the Warrior when there's nothing left to fight?
What happens to the poet when everything's healed?
What happens to my heart when you lie?
this poem took me a while....read it through,please.
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:iconssj3-shima:
its very well done
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:iconwebleedatmidnite:
WeBleedAtMidnite Feb 12, 2006
oh.....eep. >.<
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Lansay Feb 12, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
i like poetry and this is very well done. unfortunatly i don't have poetic skills like you. Its a great technique where you made comparisons to other things. by the way, thanks for the fav. i was starting to worry that my dragon wasn't worth the effort
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:iconevilspleen:
hey,it's good.thanks for the compliment-this poem seems to be my best deviation.
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Lansay Feb 12, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
well every one has thier best
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insideproductions Feb 1, 2006   Writer
:clap:
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:iconevilspleen:
thanks. just dont ask for an encore,i'm poet'd out.
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insideproductions Feb 1, 2006   Writer
:D
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:iconthelennina:
Brilliant wording.
Very nicely done. :D
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:iconevilspleen:
Yeah,it just kind of...flowed through me.thanks a lot. it's definantly the best poem i have ever written.
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